According to my grade, assignment and writing, my professor of English 100 meet with me to discuss about some important point on my Hiraeth project,
During the meeting, we talk about how I can revise my work until the end of the semester. We talk about how I can revise my Hiraeth project, what grade I think I have earn in this class and how I can improve myself before the end of the semester. He gives me some good ideas about how I can extend my writing, make it clear and revise it by giving the name of my village, the clothes we used to wear when we want to go our field. He told me to check my paragraph and try to put it in order. In my blog post, in some assignment I put the category and the number of the assignment and he told me to delete those stuffs because there are unnecessary. My professor told me to create a scene and make the people who are reading feel like it is happening now. I think that if I follow all this instructions and revise everything I will get a good grade at the end of the semester. My plan is to focus more on paragraph and make them more stronger by doing more reseach and think more deeply about my story.
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